Toriels first trip

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5 Responses to Toriels first trip

  1. spaine says:

    Beautifully written. A lovely wistful story. Why was she on the Central Line? Where was she going? Where was the mountain next to her house? I love writing that begs questions. Well done.

  2. heanb says:

    great story sky. I enjoyed this but why is she the Central line

  3. mills says:

    Mr. Paine, she was going to Hawaii and her house was next to a mountain that looked bueatiful

  4. tomko says:

    Great written. A lovely story keep up the good work. But one thing where were she going?

  5. mills says:

    She is going to hawaii to meet her friend Catty

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