The Magic Umbrella

This entry was posted in News. Bookmark the permalink.

9 Responses to The Magic Umbrella

  1. tomko says:

    A great story brook I really like your drawing well done keep up the good work have a GREAT day.
    By Owen

  2. stapg says:

    fantastic use of powerful words. fro George,s

  3. teagj says:

    Well done Brooke great story, how did the volcano erupt?

  4. mills says:

    love the story Brooke! How did it evaporate? I am not sure aswell.

  5. thomg says:

    nice work broke

  6. faira says:

    WOW! Best ever Brook

  7. abes says:

    great story brooke! I love your drawing!

  8. devet says:

    I love your story and you used amazing powerful words keep up with the good work.

  9. chakt says:

    Powerful story I really like the verbs you have use like squirted, showered and floated I really want to read on

Comments are closed.