Its not like the movies

6 Responses to Its not like the movies

1. spaine says:

   January 27, 2016 at 12:44 pm

   Very interesting idea. I really like the way the story is left open ended. Where did you float off to? I like the use of adjectives to bring the story to life. Mr Paine
2. abes says:

   January 27, 2016 at 2:12 pm

   good idea junior! I really want to know where DID you float off to??
3. mills says:

   January 27, 2016 at 2:14 pm

   Cool story ! The title hoked me in! Loads of suspense at the end.
4. teagj says:

   January 27, 2016 at 2:16 pm

   Great story Junior!
5. tylej says:

   January 27, 2016 at 2:24 pm

   I like the way you have ended with a cliff hanger and used adjectives really good story junior!
6. bafly says:

   January 27, 2016 at 2:25 pm

   I love the way you left me hanging

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