Very good Adam. Please do check your grammar and punctuation though!
Miss Tytherleigh
To Adam I have noticed a couple of Grammar mistakes so can you check theme , but other than that your story is really fascinating from rhiannon
Dear Adam, Why weren’t you allowed on the ride? Who told you that you weren’t allowed? I look forward to hearing from you. (-: M.H 🙂
Dear Adam Cool story I really like the part about the super roller coaster keep up the good story’s. By Owen
Very good story adam!
I haven’t had a reply to my one yet Adam… 😉
Why weren’t you allowed Adam
Sky 🙂 🙂
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Very good Adam. Please do check your grammar and punctuation though!
Miss Tytherleigh
To Adam
I have noticed a couple of Grammar mistakes so can you check theme , but other than that your story is really fascinating
from rhiannon
Dear Adam,
Why weren’t you allowed on the ride?
Who told you that you weren’t allowed?
I look forward to hearing from you.
(-: M.H 🙂
Dear Adam
Cool story I really like the part about the super roller coaster keep up the good story’s.
By Owen
Very good story adam!
I haven’t had a reply to my one yet Adam… 😉
Why weren’t you allowed Adam
Sky 🙂 🙂