Very imaginative, Frankie. You are missing a few comma’s, though. I like the ellipses at the end.
I like your ideas and use of repetition. This is very funny.
Your second sentence needs a capital letter, but great start!
Well done Frankie!This is a very good piece of writing x
this is very unusual and interesting
This I great Frankie it is really imaginative well done
hi my name is Myles and you have just blew my mind
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Very imaginative, Frankie. You are missing a few comma’s, though. I like the ellipses at the end.
I like your ideas and use of repetition. This is very funny.
Your second sentence needs a capital letter, but great start!
Well done Frankie!This is a very good piece of writing x
this is very unusual and interesting
This I great Frankie it is really imaginative well done
hi my name is Myles and you have just blew my mind