Well done, Ella. Original idea for a blog. Just remember that you are missing a few comma’s.
I like your your work its a very descriptive
Really god. Love your sentence openers. Maybe try and use your own idea.
it was very good I really enjoyed reading it
I really enjoyed reading this, I like the way you started your sentence with ‘opening’ instead of saying I opened the gate.
This is good Ella, you used a really good opener. It is very descriptive, but like Kamaree said your missing a few comma’s. Overall I think your work is really good. 🙂
this is very
Well done Ella, this is a very good piece of writing xx
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great work
great idea Ella I love Charlie and the chocolate well done
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Well done, Ella. Original idea for a blog. Just remember that you are missing a few comma’s.
I like your your work its a very descriptive
Really god. Love your sentence openers. Maybe try and use your own idea.
it was very good I really enjoyed reading it
I really enjoyed reading this, I like the way you started your sentence with ‘opening’ instead of saying I opened the gate.
This is good Ella, you used a really good opener. It is very descriptive, but like Kamaree said your missing a few comma’s.
Overall I think your work is really good. 🙂
this is very
Well done Ella, this is a very good piece of writing xx
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great work
great idea Ella I love Charlie and the chocolate well done