Great blog, Martha. You built up plenty of suspense and tension and made this really enjoyable to read.
I love your use of interesting punctuation! Well done xx
a very well written story. I really want to know what happens next!
Very detailed. you always put loads into 100 words. well done 😀
Grabbed my attention straight away, and great use of ellipsis.
Amazing blog, I like your description and the suspense. It makes me want to know who the person is. I think your story is really good. 🙂
wow, wow, wow. make a sequel. quickly. you really grabbed my attention and was really annoyed to see it end.
Very good! I like your idea for this story ;).
this is amazing and you built up alot of suspense
just amazing
Martha , this blog is amazing and it really built up tension well done
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Great blog, Martha. You built up plenty of suspense and tension and made this really enjoyable to read.
I love your use of interesting punctuation! Well done xx
a very well written story. I really want to know what happens next!
Very detailed. you always put loads into 100 words. well done 😀
Grabbed my attention straight away, and great use of ellipsis.
Amazing blog, I like your description and the suspense.
It makes me want to know who the person is.
I think your story is really good. 🙂
wow, wow, wow. make a sequel. quickly. you really grabbed my attention and was really annoyed to see it end.
Very good! I like your idea for this story ;).
this is amazing and you built up alot of suspense
just amazing
Martha , this blog is amazing and it really built up tension well done