Frankie, another interesting and unusual take on the week’s challenge. You must share your writing with your family. It is easy to reads because it is the biggest font.
The only strange bit was the tense change after the first few sentences. I would either split it into 2 paragraphs for each tense or written it all on the past tense, e.g.
That was the day I went on the adventure. Yay! Off I went – yippee! (or similar).
Frankie, another interesting and unusual take on the week’s challenge. You must share your writing with your family. It is easy to reads because it is the biggest font.
Mr Paine
I enjoyed it too! Well done.
The only strange bit was the tense change after the first few sentences. I would either split it into 2 paragraphs for each tense or written it all on the past tense, e.g.
That was the day I went on the adventure. Yay! Off I went – yippee! (or similar).
Look forward to seeing the next piece,
Mrs Haka