Abigail I enjoy reading your blogs. They are always very original and well written. Please take the time to share your writing with you family.
Mr Paine
Yes, a great piece. Lots of great sentence openers – I particularly like the use of the adverb “cautiously”.
The only sentence which does not fit is the first one as it is about the future and all the rest is in the past. Perhaps using “I went on” would work better? What do you think?
I will no doubt enjoy your next piece just as much.
Abigail I enjoy reading your blogs. They are always very original and well written. Please take the time to share your writing with you family.
Mr Paine
Yes, a great piece. Lots of great sentence openers – I particularly like the use of the adverb “cautiously”.
The only sentence which does not fit is the first one as it is about the future and all the rest is in the past. Perhaps using “I went on” would work better? What do you think?
I will no doubt enjoy your next piece just as much.
Mrs Haka
Amazing work! I really enjoyed it.
this was great I love McDonalds too!!!