Michigan, USA. Wow! This is a great post! I will be submitting it for the weekly showcase! You are a great story teller. I loved your use of strong words. Lone cornflake, pounded continuously, eagerly, etc. You have a wonderful imagination! Thank you for participating in this week’s 100 word challenge!
Kamaree I had to come and have a read as I saw a request below the entries asking that your piece be put into the showcase. And yes it is fantastic, interesting and imaginative. Purposeful punctuation that enhances meaning as well as cleverly constructed sentences. In short, a good read!
Ms McGrath Team 100, Australia
I saw your 1oowc was up for the showcase so I came to have a read.
What an amazing short story. I was hooked right from the first line.
I read on eagerly and was treated to: strong vocabulary strong openers, wonderful out of the box imagination sprinkled with a bit of tension and then it finished off with a brightly coloured conclusion.
Fantastic.
Thank you Kamaree.
What great writing Kamaree, I feel as though I am in the story with you.
Wonderful imagination, and well constructed to fit into the 100 words challenge. Well done.
Michigan, USA. Wow! This is a great post! I will be submitting it for the weekly showcase! You are a great story teller. I loved your use of strong words. Lone cornflake, pounded continuously, eagerly, etc. You have a wonderful imagination! Thank you for participating in this week’s 100 word challenge!
Kamaree I had to come and have a read as I saw a request below the entries asking that your piece be put into the showcase. And yes it is fantastic, interesting and imaginative. Purposeful punctuation that enhances meaning as well as cleverly constructed sentences. In short, a good read!
Ms McGrath Team 100, Australia
What a fantastic piece of writing!
I agree – a good piece in the word limit. Well done!
I saw your 1oowc was up for the showcase so I came to have a read.
What an amazing short story. I was hooked right from the first line.
I read on eagerly and was treated to: strong vocabulary strong openers, wonderful out of the box imagination sprinkled with a bit of tension and then it finished off with a brightly coloured conclusion.
Fantastic.
Thank you Kamaree.
Great writing, Kamaree. Fantastic piece of work.
Thank you Elise!
Well done Kamaree
Well done, Kamaree
This is a showcase special, amazing , fantastic and fabulous piece of work.
that’s really good Kamaree. I loved the way you used the words.
Thank you Serena!