Great story micheal, good use of ellipsis
Really good i like it
Good story but try to add a bit more powerful verbs
Michael this was a great blog i really enjoyed reading this the only thing I would say is to use some sentence openers it would really improve your work.
You forgot to say ….a whistle blew and everyone disappeared…. but it was amazing
I love the story very intresting
I really liked your story.
I really like your stroy
i really enjoyed your story maybe try to add in the prompt next time
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Great story micheal, good use of ellipsis
Really good i like it
Good story but try to add a bit more powerful verbs
Michael this was a great blog i really enjoyed reading this the only thing I would say is to use some sentence openers it would really improve your work.
You forgot to say ….a whistle blew and everyone disappeared…. but it was amazing
I love the story very intresting
I really liked your story.
I really like your stroy
i really enjoyed your story maybe try to add in the prompt next time