Well Done, Daisy really good 100 Word Challenge wonderful words and I think your team for netball was the best ever you would of surely won!!!!! Hope you won the race and also where did everyone disappear too??? Well Done keep up the great work. From Zoe
Well Done Daisy! I love your story, its extremely well written and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You started your story very well and it was very different and that’s one of the many things I loved about it!
Nice story but I would say to add some adverbs
Fantastic story daisy! i really enoye reading it keep up the good work! xx
brilliant punctilion . good verbs.
Great story Daisy i like how you said beep beep beep at the beginning
Good opening for your story about sports day .
Well Done, Daisy really good 100 Word Challenge wonderful words and I think your team for netball was the best ever you would of surely won!!!!! Hope you won the race and also where did everyone disappear too??? Well Done keep up the great work. From Zoe
Daisy I really liked your story, the part I really like was when you said the whistle blew then everyone disappeared.
Well Done Daisy! I love your story, its extremely well written and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You started your story very well and it was very different and that’s one of the many things I loved about it!