Well Done, Jaycee you have written a very good 100wc. You have put in lots of good questions, keep up the good work hope u do lots more of these 100 word challenges and hope u always never give up. Well Done From Zoe
Brilliant blog Jaycee, where did you get such creative writing skills from you have used so many interesting words and lots of punctuation. Keep up the good work.WELLDONE!!! Brooke
Really good I like it 😉
very good Jaycee very funny story.
Hi Jaycee i love your story its short and really good by Tuvana
why don’t you like P.E ?
i like the question at the end of the story it leaves you thinking of when will they return or what im thing how will they return
I think the coach did it because he was horrible to everyone.
Awesome question at the end.
WELL DONE!
Very good cliff hangers! Well Done Jaycee!
Well Done, Jaycee you have written a very good 100wc. You have put in lots of good questions, keep up the good work hope u do lots more of these 100 word challenges and hope u always never give up. Well Done From Zoe
Well done!
I like the way you ended your story on a cliff hanger!
When will they return ?
Amazing. Just amazing. Where do you think they went?
M
This is a really good blog, Jaycee it was really funny the only thing is you spelled 1 word wrong.
love your story ,very mysterious. the only problem was that you spelt file wrong
Brilliant blog Jaycee, where did you get such creative writing skills from you have used so many interesting words and lots of punctuation. Keep up the good work.WELLDONE!!! Brooke
Good amazing i can’t see any thing wrong with it i love but when will they return is a really a cliff hanger.
Well Done!
I really like the way you left on a cliff-hanger!
What will happen next?
good work Jaycee just check how you spell fial it should’ve been single file