Hi Samantha, I loved reading your story it was brilliant. Keep up the good work.
Hi Samantha, Really good letter well done! just one thing, try and use more powerful verbs and adjectives otherwise brilliant!
Well done Samantha on your piece of writing! I like how you have made a point and backed it up with evidence. a very good style and piece of writing.
From Stephen in year6
Fantastic blog Samanta! maybe you could improve on vocabulary but I enjoyed it a lot.
great job!!! 😉
i really liked your story.
Amazing but you should put in some more adjectives
Brilliant Samantha, You have wrote a wonderful letter you have given points and backed them up with evidence well done you should be proud. From Zoe
Really good letter, I f you’d sent that to me I know I would go. You have good perswasive language and there’s no need for next steps.
Michael.
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Hi Samantha,
I loved reading your story it was brilliant. Keep up the good work.
Hi Samantha,
Really good letter well done!
just one thing, try and use more powerful verbs and adjectives otherwise brilliant!
Well done Samantha on your piece of writing! I like how you have made a point and backed it up with evidence. a very good style and piece of writing.
From Stephen in year6
Fantastic blog Samanta! maybe you could improve on vocabulary but I enjoyed it a lot.
great job!!! 😉
i really liked your story.
Amazing but you should put in some more adjectives
Brilliant Samantha, You have wrote a wonderful letter you have given points and backed them up with evidence well done you should be proud. From Zoe
Really good letter, I f you’d sent that to me I know I would go. You have good perswasive language and there’s no need for next steps.
Michael.