Hi Alexia,
I loved reading your story it was amazing but there is one mistake. When you said “not with there dads” there was spelt wrong so do you know what spelling of there it is. Is their or they’re!!!
Well done, Alexia! This is a very good story because if I were Liam , I would definitely go to space. This is a great example of persuasive writing. Also, please check out our writing in year 6.
From, Sky M
Alexia i love your story but i think you should be a bit more carful with your spelling the one where your spouse to be writing `one` but instead of `wan`. By: Tuvana
greet work !! cant wait to read the next one !!
Hi Alexia,
I loved reading your story it was amazing but there is one mistake. When you said “not with there dads” there was spelt wrong so do you know what spelling of there it is. Is their or they’re!!!
Thank you for your comment, Rhiannon.
Alexia 🙂
Well done, Alexia! This is a very good story because if I were Liam , I would definitely go to space. This is a great example of persuasive writing. Also, please check out our writing in year 6.
From, Sky M
Well done Alexia! Brilliant blog, I liked how you gave reasons for why he should go to space!
I really like it! good work 🙂
great blog but just think about spelling. overall its a fantastic blog!
WELL DONE! AMAZING! AWESOME! COOL! GOOD! GREAT!
very good Alexia, just think about your spelling on line 3
I really like this blog because you’ve described everything so keep up the good work 🙂
well done this is a great piece of work you’ve done really well yours is much better than my one last year , this is a great piece of work.
nice reasons
Alexia i love your story but i think you should be a bit more carful with your spelling the one where your spouse to be writing `one` but instead of `wan`. By: Tuvana
I agree with Tuvana on the spelling but other than that you have made points and persuaded Liam. Well done.
Michael.