Hi Oliver,
Thank you for taking the time to do this week’s 100 Word Challenge. I enjoyed reading your work. You’ve used some great descriptive language like – at large – precious property – slithered up the stairs – and this really adds to your story. I wonder what happened to the thief in the end? I hope he was caught.
I look forward to reading more of your adventures.
Keep up the good work!
Mrs Boyce,
Team 100WC
Ireland
Hey Oliver.
Great story and I loved it where you used descriptive language like precious and slithered. The last sentence makes me
want to read on.
From Sky
Hi Oliver,
Thank you for taking the time to do this week’s 100 Word Challenge. I enjoyed reading your work. You’ve used some great descriptive language like – at large – precious property – slithered up the stairs – and this really adds to your story. I wonder what happened to the thief in the end? I hope he was caught.
I look forward to reading more of your adventures.
Keep up the good work!
Mrs Boyce,
Team 100WC
Ireland
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Hey Oliver.
Great story and I loved it where you used descriptive language like precious and slithered. The last sentence makes me
want to read on.
From Sky