A great story and well done for high-lighting the challenge words. You have created a great story. I like the adjectives you used. Well done. Mr Paine
fantastic use of speech and good use of powerful words. from George.s
I agree with Mr Paine, Jess. loads of adjectives. I wish I could of highlighted the challenge words.
great story
lovely story Jess xx I love how the man floated down like a bird. !!!!
I really liked your story
A great story I like all the adjectives well done keep up the good work.
Very interesting story! Great use of powerful verbs and exciting adjectives.
great story jess! I like the way you highlighted the challenge words too. you also used some good adjectives!
wow
this is a intresting
amazing story jess I cant wait to read another one:) 🙂 🙂
wow jess this is amazing your story is brilliant !!!!!
nice work jess I also like the way u highlight the words
this is a realy intresting story !!! well done … 🙂
amazing story probably the best yet 🙂
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A great story and well done for high-lighting the challenge words. You have created a great story. I like the adjectives you used. Well done. Mr Paine
fantastic use of speech and good use of powerful words. from George.s
I agree with Mr Paine, Jess. loads of adjectives. I wish I could of highlighted the challenge words.
great story
lovely story Jess xx I love how the man floated down like a bird. !!!!
I really liked your story
A great story I like all the adjectives well done keep up the good work.
Very interesting story! Great use of powerful verbs and exciting adjectives.
great story jess! I like the way you highlighted the challenge words too. you also used some good adjectives!
wow
this is a intresting
amazing story jess I cant wait to read another one:) 🙂 🙂
wow jess this is amazing your story is brilliant !!!!!
nice work jess I also like the way u highlight the words
this is a realy intresting story !!! well done … 🙂
amazing story probably the best yet
🙂