I like some of the words like marvellous powerful a solid brick wall.
great story I liked the alliteration and the powerful verbs 🙂 :0 😀
Good Story
Well done Daisy, brilliant story love the alliteration when you said the marvellous mountain!
the best story I have read today
I love your story and keep up with the good work
well done daisy, I really enjoyed reading this great story!
good story daisy. unlucky about your red umbrella1 hopefully you’ll get it back some way!
I really enjoyed reading this Daisy, just add more adjective. From Brooke
Great Story about I would like to find out more about the umbrella I like the adjectives you used like marvellous mountain and powerful outbreak
GREAT STORY daisey 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 :):):):):):):):) :0 :):):) I really liked it 🙂
To Daisy, I love the story so much and what happened to the umbrella? Sky M 😉
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I like some of the words like marvellous powerful a solid brick wall.
great story I liked the alliteration and the powerful verbs 🙂 :0 😀
Good Story
Well done Daisy, brilliant story love the alliteration when you said the marvellous mountain!
the best story I have read today
I love your story and keep up with the good work
well done daisy, I really enjoyed reading this great story!
good story daisy. unlucky about your red umbrella1 hopefully you’ll get it back some way!
I really enjoyed reading this Daisy, just add more adjective. From Brooke
Great Story about I would like to find out more about the umbrella I like the adjectives you used like marvellous mountain and powerful outbreak
GREAT STORY daisey 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
:):):):):):):):) :0 :):):) I really liked it 🙂
To Daisy,
I love the story so much and what happened to the umbrella?
Sky M 😉