Very humorous, Frankie, but you are missing some speech marks and comma’s. Well done.
This is so different to other people’s pieces – made me smile.
Don’t forget speech marks next time.
That was really interesting Frankie. You definitely thought outside the box. I like your creativity. Try and add some description and speech marks.
try to use brackets.
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Very humorous, Frankie, but you are missing some speech marks and comma’s. Well done.
This is so different to other people’s pieces – made me smile.
Don’t forget speech marks next time.
That was really interesting Frankie. You definitely thought outside the box. I like your creativity. Try and add some description and speech marks.
try to use brackets.