Brilliant and original idea to do a poem. Great use of rhyming words. Well done.
1st poem challenge I have read – an interesting idea.
Sometimes trying hard to rhyme can make some lines a little weaker than others in terms of impact and description. I’d love to see a descriptive poem next time.
ok, thank you Mrs Haka and Kamaree!!!
Lovely poem, kept my interest!
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Brilliant and original idea to do a poem. Great use of rhyming words. Well done.
1st poem challenge I have read – an interesting idea.
Sometimes trying hard to rhyme can make some lines a little weaker than others in terms of impact and description. I’d love to see a descriptive poem next time.
ok, thank you Mrs Haka and Kamaree!!!
Lovely poem, kept my interest!