I would love to know what happened to the stray dog. I really enjoyed how you started a sentence with ‘Rushing’.
Always reread your work to check you haven’t missed any full stops.
This is lovely writing. You have used some great phrases which enable the reader to feel the pull of the wind and the panic of being dragged back. I wanted to know what was going to happen next! Well done for taking part in the 100 Word Challenge this week.
I like the simile about the train – a great opening!
Well done.
I would love to know what happened to the stray dog. I really enjoyed how you started a sentence with ‘Rushing’.
Always reread your work to check you haven’t missed any full stops.
This is lovely writing. You have used some great phrases which enable the reader to feel the pull of the wind and the panic of being dragged back. I wanted to know what was going to happen next! Well done for taking part in the 100 Word Challenge this week.
Missing some commas ,but apart from that it was a great piece of writing!