Excellent descriptive writing. I was there in the zoo with you
OUTSTANDING
Very good Emily! I like how you personofocated(I hope I spelt that right) the trees as swaying to the padding the lions feet!
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Excellent descriptive writing. I was there in the zoo with you
OUTSTANDING
Very good Emily! I like how you personofocated(I hope I spelt that right) the trees as swaying to the padding the lions feet!