nice wow words i liked how you made it so intense also nice use of punctuation you kept good suspense throughout your story.
That is a great story but make sure it makes sense and doesn’t end in a cliff hanger but if it does it needs to keep the reader in suspense.
Katie, a great piece of writing. You have used punctuation and short sentences to create real tension. I want to read more and find out what happens. That is always good when the writer leaves you hungry for more. Well done. Mr Paine
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nice wow words i liked how you made it so intense also nice use of punctuation you kept good suspense throughout your story.
That is a great story but make sure it makes sense and doesn’t end in a cliff hanger but if it does it needs to keep the reader in suspense.
Katie, a great piece of writing. You have used punctuation and short sentences to create real tension. I want to read more and find out what happens. That is always good when the writer leaves you hungry for more. Well done. Mr Paine