Really good the way you described yourself as a ‘proffesional’ Im sure others will agree! This is a lovely piece of work you have produced it made me laugh a bit. Maybe you could include a rhetorical question and think of more reasons and advice to give Liam but mainly I think its an interesting letter and it will hook the reader to read on.
Hi Emily.
Well done on your story. I really enjoyed reading this! This would no doubt make me go to space. I have read
this story about Liam and it is a great story. Also please check out my blogs and comment.
From, Sky M
I loved your story and you have used lots of good words like troublesome or peneltimia By Tuvana
Really good the way you described yourself as a ‘proffesional’ Im sure others will agree! This is a lovely piece of work you have produced it made me laugh a bit. Maybe you could include a rhetorical question and think of more reasons and advice to give Liam but mainly I think its an interesting letter and it will hook the reader to read on.
I really like your letter especially at the end it says ‘please go to space, if not for you for me’ that’s a famous saying ‘if not for you for me’
Hi Emily.
Well done on your story. I really enjoyed reading this! This would no doubt make me go to space. I have read
this story about Liam and it is a great story. Also please check out my blogs and comment.
From, Sky M
cool i like the pic