Daisy, a gritty story with some truth. I feel for you coming up against your worst enemy. Is she an enemy just because you are jealous of her dancing ability? I hope the green washed out of your hair. There is a homophone you need to take care with, in the 4th line, penultimate sentence.
Daisy, a gritty story with some truth. I feel for you coming up against your worst enemy. Is she an enemy just because you are jealous of her dancing ability? I hope the green washed out of your hair. There is a homophone you need to take care with, in the 4th line, penultimate sentence.
Your story had a cliff hanger
this is a good story but maybe next time add a ing, ly or ed opener
Wow Daisy! Amazing story, loved who you left it on a cliffhanger! I wonder what happened to your hair afterwards!
Hi Daisy, loved your story keep up your good writing skills and never stop. by zoe