THE HOT DOG MAN ATTACKS

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  1. Mr Paine says:

    Owen, a highly unique and unusual story. You use your imagination to great effect. When writing, I think you should read the story back to yourself as some of the sentences start in odd places. Read it through and see if you would change where the sentences start and end.

  2. venab says:

    Owen thank you for doing my request of a part 2 but please do more its so funny

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