Dear Junior,
I loved reading your 100wc. What I liked about it was that you used your a amazing imagination like I was shocked to see that the petrol station has turned in a green pool. I also like all the powerful words you have used. I think that you should improve some of your words to make at a good standard.
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From Paige
Junior, very imaginative. I am glad you see yourself as Bugatti driver in the future – good ambition. Did you know the new Bugatti model will sell for about £2 million? You have written a complete and entertaining story in 100 words. Well done.
Dear Junior,
I loved reading your 100wc. What I liked about it was that you used your a amazing imagination like I was shocked to see that the petrol station has turned in a green pool. I also like all the powerful words you have used. I think that you should improve some of your words to make at a good standard.
please visit our blog http://ribbledriveprimary.net/
From Paige
Junior, very imaginative. I am glad you see yourself as Bugatti driver in the future – good ambition. Did you know the new Bugatti model will sell for about £2 million? You have written a complete and entertaining story in 100 words. Well done.
WELL DONE! I REALLY LIKE YOUR BLOG! I think it was one of your best blogs.
Junior, I really like your story and it is very creative. well done!
From Sky