Excellent work. This is a great interpretation of the painting. Wonderful use of imagery describing the “Dragon Brigade” and the character screaming. It was very frightening. I was a little confused when you said, “The atmosphere was made.” Did you by chance misuse a word. Keep up the great work.
Hi Rhainnon, love your story. I like the last sentence, there was only one thing left to do, JUMP …… I love that part so much. Keep writing amazing stories. Well done Rhainnon!!
Wow I am amazed at how cool your writing is brilliant job!!!!!1
Excellent work. This is a great interpretation of the painting. Wonderful use of imagery describing the “Dragon Brigade” and the character screaming. It was very frightening. I was a little confused when you said, “The atmosphere was made.” Did you by chance misuse a word. Keep up the great work.
Nooooooooooo! Don’t jump! I really want to know what happens next. Well done :o)
Hi Rhainnon, love your story. I like the last sentence, there was only one thing left to do, JUMP …… I love that part so much. Keep writing amazing stories. Well done Rhainnon!!