What a shame he made you end the story. I wanted to know what happened next.
WOW! Ben it was amazing! Well Done!
I really liked your story
To Ben, Your story is a brilliant story but I have noticed a mistake. I have a little challenge for you. Can you spot where you would need a comma in the first sentence. If you can well done if not ask me and I will tell you well done ben.
I like your story its very funny 😉
Well Done Ben! Loved the way you used brackets as if you were talking to the reader!
Hi Ben, love your story. Keep writing AMAZING stories and I liked how you descried his room with deserted. From Zoe
I like your story ben! I like the way you used brackets in your story
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What a shame he made you end the story. I wanted to know what happened next.
WOW! Ben it was amazing! Well Done!
I really liked your story
To Ben,
Your story is a brilliant story but I have noticed a mistake.
I have a little challenge for you. Can you spot where you would need a comma in the first sentence. If you can well done if not ask me and I will tell you well done ben.
I like your story its very funny 😉
Well Done Ben! Loved the way you used brackets as if you were talking to the reader!
Hi Ben, love your story. Keep writing AMAZING stories and I liked how you descried his room with deserted. From Zoe
I like your story ben! I like the way you used brackets in your story