Michael.. I like your idea that aliens used a man’s greed to infiltrate earth. It is a great little story. I think you could improve the opening sentence though. Do you agree? Mr Paine
Thank you Sir, I am pleased with it as well although I do admit that the first sentence could be improved. :-B
WOW I really liked this
Dear Michael I like how the world end at the end that always gets me. By Owen.
Done well! mick! It was a good story!
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Michael.. I like your idea that aliens used a man’s greed to infiltrate earth. It is a great little story. I think you could improve the opening sentence though. Do you agree? Mr Paine
Thank you Sir, I am pleased with it as well although I do admit that the first sentence could be improved.
:-B
WOW I really liked this
Dear Michael
I like how the world end at the end that always gets me.
By Owen.
Done well! mick! It was a good story!