Hi Emily
Great story, you used the key words and lots of other great describing words too including avalanche, dire, flailing, to create a story with real-life action which drew me into the story, I could imagine being on the mountainside with you.
Looking forward to more of your great writing.
Was excited to see your great piece was shortlisted this week for the Special Showcase. Well deserved! I enjoyed it alot when I read it when you first posted it.
Fantastic Emily! I really liked some of the words you used e.g., ploughing, steep, hunting, tedious, flailing, dire.
This is very good Emily – I like the setting and the comment on the toes makes it seem real.
Hi Emily
Great story, you used the key words and lots of other great describing words too including avalanche, dire, flailing, to create a story with real-life action which drew me into the story, I could imagine being on the mountainside with you.
Looking forward to more of your great writing.
Auckland, New Zealand
Well done Emily. Have you seen that you are in the Special Showcase this week, fantastic piece of writing.
Was excited to see your great piece was shortlisted this week for the Special Showcase. Well deserved! I enjoyed it alot when I read it when you first posted it.
Mrs Haka
Excellent Emily!
I’d love to hear what happens next!
Mrs Head x
this was really great Emily. No wonder it was in the special showcase. love the way you thought outside the box!