I would suggest that the layout would be better if each phrase was on a separate line:
The Lion danced in the night, The river glistened in the light. etc.
‘Phew’ instead of ‘Few’, but a brilliant piece of writing, especially with the 100 word challenge to fit it into 🙂 Well done!
well Mr Tony sir I did lay it out like you said but when I published it, it changed the layout I’m very sorry for your mistake and when I put phew it spell checked me to say few instead. but anyway thanks for your comment I really appreciate it.
Very clever, and you are right about the general election!
thanks.
Great ideas, but next time you could edit your punctuation and remember spaces for presentation.
AMAZING work,great ideas.
Well done Megan
Wow, Megan this is brilliant! I loved reading it x
Thank you Mrs Haka I will try alot harder next time. Thank you for the note on the white board in your room it gave me alot of confidence for SATS.
Amazing there was a few errors but it is an amazing piece of work
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I would suggest that the layout would be better if each phrase was on a separate line:
The Lion danced in the night,
The river glistened in the light.
etc.
‘Phew’ instead of ‘Few’, but a brilliant piece of writing, especially with the 100 word challenge to fit it into 🙂 Well done!
well Mr Tony sir I did lay it out like you said but when I published it, it changed the layout I’m very sorry for your mistake and when I put phew it spell checked me to say few instead. but anyway thanks for your comment I really appreciate it.
Very clever, and you are right about the general election!
thanks.
Great ideas, but next time you could edit your punctuation and remember spaces for presentation.
AMAZING work,great ideas.
Well done Megan
Wow, Megan this is brilliant! I loved reading it x
Thank you Mrs Haka I will try alot harder next time. Thank you for the note on the white board in your room it gave me alot of confidence for SATS.
Amazing there was a few errors but it is an amazing piece of work