I really enjoyed reading your entry. You have included dialogue well within your writing. I especially liked when you included thoughts in italics. You were able to show that your character won by the use of the the sounds of the cars, drums, horns and the word overthrow. I don’t follow English government but I can see that you are very passionate about this topic.
That one is better than my!
Hello Boban,
I really enjoyed reading your entry. You have included dialogue well within your writing. I especially liked when you included thoughts in italics. You were able to show that your character won by the use of the the sounds of the cars, drums, horns and the word overthrow. I don’t follow English government but I can see that you are very passionate about this topic.
Mrs Scharf
Bowen, Australia
I like how you used your dialogs and how you ended the story.