Well done Amelia for completing the 100 word challenge. I can see that you have worked hard on your sentence structure, have varied your openers and have even included a simile. Remember to use your words carefully when you only have 100 and try not to repeat things – you say he was riding/cycling through the forest twice. Did it all go black as he fell to sleep because it was a haunted forest?
Keep rising to the challenge.
Mrs Gill (Team 100WC Leeds UK)
Well done Amelia for completing the 100 word challenge. I can see that you have worked hard on your sentence structure, have varied your openers and have even included a simile. Remember to use your words carefully when you only have 100 and try not to repeat things – you say he was riding/cycling through the forest twice. Did it all go black as he fell to sleep because it was a haunted forest?
Keep rising to the challenge.
Mrs Gill (Team 100WC Leeds UK)
Well done for completing the challenge this week. Have you shown it to your parents?
wow that’s great good suspense
well done I really enjoyed reading that story
Amelia, this is a very good piece of writing. I really enjoyed reading it!
woah! unique story, its really something! It was so hilarious!
well done building up the tension at the start.
Howea it was just amazing