Samua, your writing is very descriptive. I think I will share it with my class when we start school again tomorrow after our 2 week holiday break. Your writing really worked to paint a picture in words for the reader. I also like the way you have used different words to start sentences with rather than repeated them, this also makes your writing interesting for the reader.
Regards,
Miss Gow (Brookfiled School, New Zealand ) 100WC
nice
Samua, your writing is very descriptive. I think I will share it with my class when we start school again tomorrow after our 2 week holiday break. Your writing really worked to paint a picture in words for the reader. I also like the way you have used different words to start sentences with rather than repeated them, this also makes your writing interesting for the reader.
Regards,
Miss Gow (Brookfiled School, New Zealand ) 100WC
WOW! This was very funny and unexpected