Hi Ella and thanks for entering the 100 WC this week! What a great piece of writing you have produced. It has a sinister undertone running all the way through, and ends with a cliff hanger. I wanted to read on, to find out what happened next! Was it the end for our hero? Did somebody save the day? It takes a strong piece of writing to make the reader continue to think after the writing has ended. I liked how you opened your writing with speech, as this takes us straight into the action. I liked how your main character asked the questions that I, as a reader, was asking! You should feel very pleased with yourself. Well done and keep writing!
Mrs Davis, Team 100, Cambridgeshire, UK
Hello Kamaree
I’m so sorry I saw Ella’s name instead of yours, at the side of the screen when I was looking for your name. I just realised my mistake when I went back to the Team 100 homepage. Please accept my apologies 🙂
Mrs Davis Team 100
Hi Ella and thanks for entering the 100 WC this week! What a great piece of writing you have produced. It has a sinister undertone running all the way through, and ends with a cliff hanger. I wanted to read on, to find out what happened next! Was it the end for our hero? Did somebody save the day? It takes a strong piece of writing to make the reader continue to think after the writing has ended. I liked how you opened your writing with speech, as this takes us straight into the action. I liked how your main character asked the questions that I, as a reader, was asking! You should feel very pleased with yourself. Well done and keep writing!
Mrs Davis, Team 100, Cambridgeshire, UK
Hello Kamaree
I’m so sorry I saw Ella’s name instead of yours, at the side of the screen when I was looking for your name. I just realised my mistake when I went back to the Team 100 homepage. Please accept my apologies 🙂
Mrs Davis Team 100