the crocidile

Posted on June 6, 2017 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to the crocidile

  1. hackg says:
    June 7, 2017 at 12:51 pm

    it was great but you forgot full stops 🙂

  2. yells says:
    June 7, 2017 at 1:00 pm

    I really like this story but it would be better with the use of punctuation.

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