try use some openers but great try
nice twist
Leaves you on a cliff hanger which makes me want to read more. It hooks the reader which you did really well. Well Done Elise!
Very welll written story. I like the style of your writing. Just remember in your last sentence that your is spelt you’re because your means belonging to you and you’re means you are. 🙂
i like the drama in your 100 word challenge
nice story Elise 🙂
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try use some openers but great try
nice twist
Leaves you on a cliff hanger which makes me want to read more. It hooks the reader which you did really well. Well Done Elise!
Very welll written story. I like the style of your writing. Just remember in your last sentence that your is spelt you’re because your means belonging to you and you’re means you are. 🙂
i like the drama in your 100 word challenge
nice story Elise 🙂