Alex. Great story. Drama and fear in 100 words. If he was given a key, was he really breaking in? Why did he do it? Was it a dare? I don’t think he will get out to yell at this friends. I hope you have shared this with your parents so they can comment too. Keep up the great writing. Mr Paine
Alex. Great story. Drama and fear in 100 words. If he was given a key, was he really breaking in? Why did he do it? Was it a dare? I don’t think he will get out to yell at this friends. I hope you have shared this with your parents so they can comment too. Keep up the great writing. Mr Paine
Wow Alex! A fantastic piece of writing. I want to know what happens next. Well done! Miss Wimshurst