You did a great job creating a depressing piece… it fits the picture perfectly. I can imagine the situation you describe (the person being voted the poorest in the world) would be a good start for a dystopian novel in the vein of The Hunger Games. To make your writing even better, I would suggest avoiding the repetition of some words (stupid, reason) and investigate synonyms instead. Keep up the great work!
Hi Ben,
You did a great job creating a depressing piece… it fits the picture perfectly. I can imagine the situation you describe (the person being voted the poorest in the world) would be a good start for a dystopian novel in the vein of The Hunger Games. To make your writing even better, I would suggest avoiding the repetition of some words (stupid, reason) and investigate synonyms instead. Keep up the great work!
Mrs Pratt (Team 100WC Australia)