What a thrilling story that is full of drama and emotion, making it very fun to read. I could easily sense the narrator’s fear of flying that was brought forth in very creative ways; from the fear of being so high in the sky, to the odd songs, and then not having a sense of place at all. Very good writing with lots of lovely detail; nice work.
This 100WC had me on the edge of my seat from start to finish- you used description and varied vocabulary to build suspense very well! I particularly liked the rhetorical question at the end of the writing- I want to know what happened though!
What a thrilling story that is full of drama and emotion, making it very fun to read. I could easily sense the narrator’s fear of flying that was brought forth in very creative ways; from the fear of being so high in the sky, to the odd songs, and then not having a sense of place at all. Very good writing with lots of lovely detail; nice work.
Hi,
This 100WC had me on the edge of my seat from start to finish- you used description and varied vocabulary to build suspense very well! I particularly liked the rhetorical question at the end of the writing- I want to know what happened though!
Emily, Team100
Thank you very much
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