What a haunting tale Brooke, almost poetic in some places. I can see you’ve worked hard to include some powerful words and phrases, which help your story become much richer. I particularly liked arms swimming ‘in a pool of black mystery.’ Wow! I wonder what your character’s name was though?
Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.
Thank you very much, I am extremely glad that you liked it and next time I will try to write the characters name I am also happy that you thought I used many powerful words and phrases. I also like the part about the pool of mystery.
What a haunting tale Brooke, almost poetic in some places. I can see you’ve worked hard to include some powerful words and phrases, which help your story become much richer. I particularly liked arms swimming ‘in a pool of black mystery.’ Wow! I wonder what your character’s name was though?
Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.
wow brooke a great story I really enjoyed reading it 😛
Well done Brooke!!!
That was an amazing story keep up the good work,!!!
Thank you very much, I am extremely glad that you liked it and next time I will try to write the characters name I am also happy that you thought I used many powerful words and phrases. I also like the part about the pool of mystery.