I really loved your story, it was amazing. I love the way you wrote it “Fantastic”. I really love the Who…Who are you part. So how is it like over there in London,UK I wish I can go there. When i’m older i’m gonna go around the world to visit places. You should look at my story’s that I write about click here. https://kidblog.org/class/language-arts-per-2/posts?author=cvq6oharwj1zizut9islwdq6a&status=published&status=review&status=draft.
We should become Penpal’s I would really love that. If you have any of these things tell me in my story The Epic Battle.
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I would love if you got back to me Thank you.
Dear Sky,
I LOVED your 100 word challenge because your title was very catchy. As soon as I saw it, I knew I wanted to read it. I also liked how you copied batman from another film and story. The thing what you could have improved on was different sentence openers. Immediately was a really good way to start one of your sentence. Please come and visit our blog at ribbledriveprimary.net/yearsix2015/
From Kaitlyn.
I really loved your story, it was amazing. I love the way you wrote it “Fantastic”. I really love the Who…Who are you part. So how is it like over there in London,UK I wish I can go there. When i’m older i’m gonna go around the world to visit places. You should look at my story’s that I write about click here. https://kidblog.org/class/language-arts-per-2/posts?author=cvq6oharwj1zizut9islwdq6a&status=published&status=review&status=draft.
We should become Penpal’s I would really love that. If you have any of these things tell me in my story The Epic Battle.
Instagram: Jenjensparkle
musicl.y: Jenjensparkle
Snapchat : Jenjensparklee
ooVoo: Jenjensparkle
Kik: Lover_girl831.
I would love if you got back to me Thank you.
Dear Sky,
I LOVED your 100 word challenge because your title was very catchy. As soon as I saw it, I knew I wanted to read it. I also liked how you copied batman from another film and story. The thing what you could have improved on was different sentence openers. Immediately was a really good way to start one of your sentence. Please come and visit our blog at ribbledriveprimary.net/yearsix2015/
From Kaitlyn.
Thank you and yes I did copy batman because he is my favourite super hero.