WOW!!! Oliver what an intresting story, it’s full of twists and turns. I love the way you said the one in the shadows, the one around every corner. Congratulations you really are amazing at writing stories.
Very good Oliver I would like to read more maybe add more adjectives to make it more powerful and full of suspense and tension overall I think this is an amazing story good verbs and a perfect ending!!!
Oh my! Oliver I cant wait to see what happens next. Im literally on the edge of my seat!
WOW!!! Oliver what an intresting story, it’s full of twists and turns. I love the way you said the one in the shadows, the one around every corner. Congratulations you really are amazing at writing stories.
such a dramatic story ! but who is ‘him’?!
whhhhhhhyyyyyy cliff hangers why
Very good Oliver I would like to read more maybe add more adjectives to make it more powerful and full of suspense and tension overall I think this is an amazing story good verbs and a perfect ending!!!
Brilliant story Oliver i love the way you end at a cliff hanger and it is fantastic, keep the amazing Oliver. WELL DONE !!!! from zoe