this is a good story i especially like how you started with action
Great story really I like it. Nice work but one thing. Why does the mad man chase you at the start?
Good story George! you really painted a picture in my mind. As if I was the boy running through the woods and what happens next!? Does the mad man find you?!
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this is a good story i especially like how you started with action
Great story really I like it. Nice work but one thing. Why does the mad man chase you at the start?
Good story George! you really painted a picture in my mind. As if I was the boy running through the woods and what happens next!? Does the mad man find you?!