I am glad they survived. Well done.
amazing story 10/10
cool 🙂
Very good yasemin but I feel that you should have finished the end a bit better.
I like your story, its really simple and i thing just at the last sentence you could of improved it just a bit.
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I am glad they survived. Well done.
amazing story 10/10
cool 🙂
Very good yasemin but I feel that you should have finished the end a bit better.
I like your story, its really simple and i thing just at the last sentence you could of improved it just a bit.