Great idea, Kira. Well done but you are missing some comma’s.
your work is very good
Well done! This is very good! It sounds like a toxic waste sweet x
This is a good piece of writing, but you are missing quite a few commas.
Very interesting Kira. I like the way you didn’t carry on after it flew out of your mouth. Perhaps use a piece of punctuation!
Kira, this is an amazing blog please keep up the good work. But I do agree with Kamaree you did forget some commas, but apart from that, it was an amazing piece of work, I really enjoyed this read.
that sounds like a rely tangy sweet
this is great kira
well done Kira fantastic peace of writing
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Great idea, Kira. Well done but you are missing some comma’s.
your work is very good
Well done! This is very good! It sounds like a toxic waste sweet x
This is a good piece of writing, but you are missing quite a few commas.
Very interesting Kira. I like the way you didn’t carry on after it flew out of your mouth. Perhaps use a piece of punctuation!
Kira, this is an amazing blog please keep up the good work. But I do agree with Kamaree you did forget some commas, but apart from that, it was an amazing piece of work, I really enjoyed this read.
that sounds like a rely tangy sweet
this is great kira
well done Kira fantastic peace of writing