Your secret is safe with me, time traveler 🙂 What a creative use of the prompt words! You clearly have a great imagination. Please be careful with run-on sentences. It helps to re-read your work aloud and listen for pauses and full stops for correct punctuation. I wonder what made Saturn the most habitable planet? Good job rising to the challenge!
Keep writing,
Mrs. Garner (Team 100)
Evergreen Park, Illinois, USA
A very different approach and style to other pupils’ efforts. I like your unique style.
Just take care in places with your punctuation – maybe re-read this aloud to a partner next time.
Your secret is safe with me, time traveler 🙂 What a creative use of the prompt words! You clearly have a great imagination. Please be careful with run-on sentences. It helps to re-read your work aloud and listen for pauses and full stops for correct punctuation. I wonder what made Saturn the most habitable planet? Good job rising to the challenge!
Keep writing,
Mrs. Garner (Team 100)
Evergreen Park, Illinois, USA
I really enjoyed reading this! It was very exciting piece of writing! Well done
Very interesting Jack!
really good