This is a very good piece of work. It feels as if you could be in the same room as the person in the story.
You have used lots of description and you have used lots of short and long sentences.
I can’t think of any negative things to say about your blog. I think it is worth 10/10.
Really great description Kamaree. I felt like I was there with you. Try to use an ellipsis at the end. 😀
This is a very good piece of work. It feels as if you could be in the same room as the person in the story.
You have used lots of description and you have used lots of short and long sentences.
I can’t think of any negative things to say about your blog. I think it is worth 10/10.
very disappointing end Kamaree but it was excellent I loved it. amazing post. keep up the good work.
very disappointing you didn’t win. I liked your story it was very good. When i read it i thought you were gonna win the competition.