We liked the story idea and the description. The ending is a bit rushed and didn’t fit the rest of the story.
Great idea Jack. Try and use the correct grammar though.
This is a really good blog jack I really liked the idea and the language you used in the blog!
wow you built up some suspense at the end and good use of the prompt it fit in well with the post.
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We liked the story idea and the description. The ending is a bit rushed and didn’t fit the rest of the story.
Great idea Jack. Try and use the correct grammar though.
This is a really good blog jack I really liked the idea and the language you used in the blog!
wow you built up some suspense at the end and good use of the prompt it fit in well with the post.